E-dubs
6. Baker uses a lot of language that magnifies the importance of the coldness felt, "spreading into a needly area of shine where it fell against their brushed-steel side-panels, and adding long glossy highlights to each of the black rubber handrails", this creates imagery for the reader of what the daily worker sees.
-The blogger uses the verb "use" which makes their writing sound weak.
Blogs With Friends
3. The setting displays the hustle and bustle of the busy work place.
-This blogger is very vague when describing the setting of the excerpt.
emily:)
2. The girl screams to her sister “I will kill if you touch this, Julie, and if you do I swear to go I will kill you, no mercy, no take-backs private property, this means you, Julie, you” which explains how the infuriated girl feels toward her sister.
-The blogger used a full quotation which is not needed.
The Wise Chieftian
His clam, but intense attention to detail leaves readers intimidated yet expectant for the forth coming of his next step.
-This blogger uses the word readers.
Best Overall Response Goes To......
DolphinCat
"The highly descriptive and scholarly diction, the almost philosophical and appreciative tone inserted into Nicholson Baker's connotation, and the harmonious flow ringing throughout the first page of his novel, instill dreamy, practically romantic admiration for the mezzanine Baker speaks of, as this first page is read."
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